- I pledge allegiance to the flag of the United States of America. And to the Republic for which it stands. One nation Under anyone’s God or the lack thereof, indivisible except for the civil war with another one comes which it may, with liberty and justice for all . This is how the Pledge of Allegiance should read If We Are Being honest to our country. The indivisible part of the Pledge of Allegiance was added after the Civil War . The god part should read as we are a country of many gods agnostics and atheists . I still pledge allegiance to the flag. I love this country very much. But we have not been acting like a country lately . We are polarized and too obsessed with party lines . I belong to the Democrat Party so that I can vote in the primaries. I used to belong to the liberal party but it has long since been abolished because we don’t have enough liberals. So I had to pick a different party and I wanted to vote in the primaries. I am a liberal person but truly my political view is I am a socialist. This is the first time I have told anyone because are polarized nation has a problem with different beliefs. That is not what our country is about. All parties should be abolished. If a person has enough money to run for president or blank my favorite Bernie Sanders can raise the money on his own and run for president they should be allowed to. I don’t care how matenny people are on the ballot. Maybe the ballot should just be a write in of one of the people who are running no we still need regular ballot I cannot write. Perhaps we need all types of government running not just Republican and Democrat and the occasional third party. I have no clue how to fix the problem in America. But I know something needs to be done. We seem to forget that this is how Civil War start. Instead of caring so much about Republican vs Democrat why don’t we worry about changing this nation in regards to the way we vote . Should it matter to you that I’m a socialist? It probably does not but it probably would if I voted for a Socialist Party. Something needs to change in this country and it needs to happen fast. This last election has made people more Angry than any other election before it. We need to get rid of the Electoral College first and foremost. It was once needed but we are not Farmers with pitchforks anymore and we don’t need someone speaking for us. I don’t know how we would do this change but it must be done for the good of our nation. Perhaps the best way I can help to change the way things are is writing about it right now. It’s not about what party you belong to. It’s about what ideas you stand behind. And many of those ideals were left out of this election. Anyone’s God or lack thereof bless you and wish you luck in the coming years. This country has become a joke to other countries. And something really bad is going to happen if we don’t do something about it. Peace and love Laurelin
Red vs. Blue
Red vs. Blue
I am stressed and that’s the best time to write a poem.
I see red States all over the country, not blue ,wherever I roam.
I am very scared I voted for Hillary you see,
I’m scared for the minorities truly scared, for you not for me.
We’re not going to let in Islamic ,Muslim decent.
Families will be separated. Not terrorism it was prevent
Mexican immigrant workers can’t get in. Economies will fall.
I will be in Mexico for December. What if he builds that wall?
If we keep immigrants out, I don’t know if I want back in.
I’m scared for us if Trump does win.
I could’ve been Born during times of War ,have no food ,no roof over my head;
You could have it so much worse ;whoever you are ,but instead…
Your relatives came here for a reason, duh;
No matter who wins, you live in the fucking United States of America!
Voting rainbow
The fever
Have you got the fever? It’s in three days.
Remember last one? TV watching.Hazed.
Red or blue or red maybe blue or red
Let’s say. What if it was purple instead?
Yellow; socialist. Green for Green Party.
Pink; liberals. Orange don’t care;they’re hardy.
It’d be cool to see them all. You think so?
That’d be one beautiful human rainbow.
Peace and love Laurelin O’Brien
The United States of America election
Election time
who you will it be, Trump or Clinton
What does the rest of the world think like Britain
They think were a joke. A puppet show.
I agree totally, you know.
The propaganda and mudslinging has given me sadness
The United States of America election has become Shear MadnessThey don’t think for themselves they just do what they see
I think Facebook has hurt the election and especially the TV
we were better before all this promotion
It’s like putting on makeup or skin lotion
It means nothing. Listen to the debates
Then you will know who you like and who everyone hates
But no one does they listen to commercials and look at pictures on Facebook
How does this teach you who is good and who is a crook?
You might as well just pick one lying on the floor
Try listening to the candidates I do implore
It’s time to be smart. And listen to their ways,
Domestic and foreign policies. Let’s go back to the old ways
Until we are smart and to truly use our own knowledge,
They never get rid of the Electoral College.
It’s time to listen to the candidates and choose for you
Things will only get worse until we do.
Paved with positivity
Pavement and where it might take you
Good intentions
They say the road to hell is paved with good intentions. But can anyone tell me why we should ever have bad intentions? I guess I am for sure going there because my intentions are always good. They say; actions speak louder than words. But what if you are unable to act and the only action you can take are words? I personally think positive always outweighs negativity. And if the road to hell is paved with good intentions so is the road to heaven. Maybe I’m just not as smart as other people. Maybe I don’t use snoops or Wikipedia enough. Maybe the grey matter in my brain has finally atrophied too much for me to think straight. I will tell you though, I don’t think so. Maybe my IQ points may have dropped but my positivity is Sky High. I just have a feeling ,that is just as important as action and good intentions. May My road be paved with positivity ,and your own as well. Whether it leads you to heaven or hell.
” oh Lord my intentions were good. Please God Don’t Let Me Be Misunderstood”