A revised version of the short story by laurelin O’Brien The bet

https://laurelinobrien.com/the-bet-a-short-story-by-laurelin-obrien/

The first version I wrote of this story had a good idea but it was all wrong and confusing. It came to me that they needed to be betting on people’s Souls. Finding it a much more enjoyable read.


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